I have had feedback from other people in the class and the most popular feedback I got to change is music and audio and for my next edit I could try to add some audio on my trailer to make it sound professional.
Another way I could change this first draft is I could include some audio from the shots for what scenes we have done to make sure the audience can hear any audio from our recordings.
Second draft:
The second draft I have done was an improvement from my last draft I have made some changes to the edited trailer when I got my feedback I have made some tweaks to my trailer I added more transitions and re arranged one of the clips in my trailer I also changed the green screen background to a forest section instead of a jungle section I also included the running in one of the green screen scene to make it slower to make it sync for the green screen, For the background music I have chosen an OST from an anime called Dragon Ball Super I have been influenced by this because I'm a fan of anime and I wanted to add a piece of soundtrack from the show to make it sound dramatic and makes the audience watching the trailer feel tense whilst watching the trailer.
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